Finish the Story Contest - WEEK #29 WINNERS!

in #finishthestory6 years ago

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HF20 Doom and Gloom mood? We laugh about it, proud storytellers!


Let's never forget that we're the Bananafish praised pirates! As always in society, it all starts with language and adopted terminology... here on steemit, it's all about whales, orcas, dolphins, minnows and even redfish.. as if we're in a sort of food-chain! It's hierarchical, inhuman and reveals a lot about how certain people think.

Well, you know what steemit Inc., we're the Bananafish!

A non existent potassium enhanced fish with mythical hidden powers, out of every chain/procedure/flow and financial bullshit to manipulate the mass. We use our critical non-passive and plenty of creativity minds and if we don't like something ... we'll unleash hell!
So please, spare us @ned with those claims of success and ridiculous/poor communication. It's under the eyes of everyone how you and your restricted elite pay always a lot of attention in not mixing with the mass, those steemians that make your system work and strive every day for reaching the crumbs falling from your table. You're not a messiah but, instead, you're cut from the same cloth as that pathetic-reptile of Mark Zuckerberg.
There are Steemians that live with a minimum wage of 18 dollars!! Act responsibly, for God's sake, you and the top 20 witnesses at your orders. Respect the people that allow this platform to exist, which are true shareholders of steemit and should always have a voice in the most authentic spirit of decentralisation.
By the way, Bananafish friends, steemit is nothing but a tool between many: the word is plenty of amazing things we can do for self determining and realise our dreams (including changing platform). So let's not fall imprisoned by these mechanisms in the hands of few greedy beings.

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Alright, let's cut the chatter, brave storytellers, the winners of the 8 STEEM are:

I converted them all into STEEM for this time as I need to see how the situation will evolve before investing again in the platform

  • 1st prize of 3 STEEM: @sidequest! "Not a nefarious hero, but one who illustrates the inner conflict of a human being. No heroic deed and the ego loses. To be able to follow this inner dialogue: a really good idea. Also the brief flare-up of energy, which was then dammed up again by thoughtfulness. You have let humanity win and calculated in all prizes." Top comment by @ehr.germany.

  • 2nd prize of 2 STEEM: @marcoriccardi! I enjoyed this heroic tale! One of my favorite parts is when he's listening to mechanical ruckus of the pylons inside the station, and simultaneously imagining how graceful their dance must appear out in the silence of the vacuum. And viewing the whole procedure as a dance, leading up to a grand finale with the anti-nanite clouds as spangles, is just awesome.
    Then there's the ending. I love that he closes his eyes at the last moment, and imagines seeing the earth restored when he opens them, and that's where you leave the story. That last little pause actually feels charged, like the electric moment after a performance, before the applause."
    Top comment by @ediblecthulhu.

  • Popular vote of 1 STEEM: @theironfelix! A skilfully written and engaging story whose secret is a fast paced and lean narration (and, of course, space pirates!).

  • Best comment prize of 2 STEEM: this is a split between @ehr.germany and @ediblecthulhu, who will receive 1 STEEM each!

  • Special mention to @raj808 for his unique story dense of beautiful descriptive parts. It's also worth mentioning the work he did in portraying a character with a complex personality in an equally complex scenario. Unfortunately, this was the longest (or the second longest) story of all the contest from the beginning, with more than 1000 words.


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    If you like this contest..SPREAD THE GOSPEL! We're grateful for your resteeming and word of mouth. Everything helps to grow together!
    A special thank to @theironfelix, @raj808, @brisby, @maverickinvictus, @cyemela, @marcoriccardi, @calluna, @oivas, @anixio, @ntowl for their precious delegations, making this project a reality!
    GOOD LUCK, BRAVE STORYTELLERS!



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“UwU ~ Thanks for the popular vote fellow potassiumnites. Congrats to the winners and here here to more people entering in! (The problem with HF20 maybe gone now, but lemme make true of my comment.)”
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Felix I wanted finally to check @anarchyhasnogods' project.. when the whole mess happened. How are things over there after this RC fuckup?

Surprisingly, we managed through it and are going by alright. This mess had given us time to actually fix some bugs that were found and better optimization with the site as well.

I'm glad to know. Let me check it now..

Things now are running smooth again but I still am a bit lame and not so much in the flow.
Thanks for appreciating my comment.

I congratulate the winners!

Must juggle myself in place before I decide what to write about next. :)

Stay well, @bananafish

I feel you! It looks like I'm in the same mood. This mess disoriented us a bit.. in italy we use to say "I'm not entirely in the bubble" refering to that tool that builders use to make a wall straight 😉 See you on Wednesday!

Ahhaahhaha! I had to think twice to understand the bubble thing. But now I got it!
Yes, looking forward to Wednesday! :)

who's not a bit crooked nowadays lol ..ciao!

This was a ton of fun as always! :D And a big boost after getting forked over the past few days. Thanks so much for the contest, and congrats to everyone on the fantastic stories! <3

Thank you! This made my day yesterday when I was feeling pretty annoyed at all of steem.

I was really struck by @raj808’s story as well — it almost knocked out calluna’s as my favorite.

The main driver is originality and also a certain coherence/maturity that you showed and made me opt for you without esitation. Figures of speech and descriptions are not the core elements of evaluation generally, altough a sure plus. @raj808 put himself out of the contest for the word number, othewise he would have surely been rewarded. See you on Wednesday!

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