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RE: My Dead Buddy - Finish The Story Contest - Week #53

in #finishthestory • 5 years ago

The best part of this story is you made an attempt to portrait the good and bad of a war and to be frank I really surprised with the way you interconnected with the human real life emotions arising out of a war.

I believe the traces of war and the intensity of sufferings, and the trauma it inflicted upon a whole people might had still persist in the people there, Are you from this place.

So, was it intentional from you to involve the topic to include in a tell me your story contest.

Anyhow the story is good. The relation between two friends were beautifully described. Thank you for this one..

Keep steaming and have a nice day

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     5 years ago 

    Thanks for your kinds words

    The best part of this story is you made an attempt to portrait the good and bad of a war and to be frank I really surprised with the way you interconnected with the human real life emotions arising out of a war.

    I wanted to demonstrate that the war Hugo carried inside him was worse than any storm. Indeed, by calming his internal conflict, the storm also ceased.

    Greetings!

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      Agree, I can understand now, That is the beauty of real story telling, you tried to portray the inner conflicts or the trauma he is carrying by comparing with a bigger than that example..

      Good to see your response in the same way you had modeled the fictio.

      Greetings from me too

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         5 years ago 

        Thanks. You are so kind.

        Greetings from me too

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