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RE: Finish The Story Contest Week 39 My Entry
I simply love this story. You followed your imagination. I could feel it. You let your mind travel, as Vartan's vision took him to a wider view of experience.
I like the way you allow a merchant to be an artist. Some would argue the two temperaments are incompatible. You have a different theory.
Lovely story, @stever82.
Thank you for reading it.