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RE: Her worst nightmare- Short Story - A finishthestory entry.
eating a double cheese burger
Dr. Wallace's idea of bliss...!
I like the way you turned it into a bureaucracy. So many papers to fill out, so many questions to answer. And Mendoza dead. An interesting take.
Call it a reaction during the difficult days of Dieting.
Yes once again I agree with @agmoore .. I like the your original interpretation and the humour permeating the whole story! It's going to be very difficult to choose this week.
Ah, btw don't forget to vote your favorite story