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RE: Awakenings - Finish The Fiction Contest #32
I think this is brilliant. I love the way you turn the cute sprout into a mythic monster. Worthy of every dark fairy tale ever told. Jonah, Pinocchio--the pedigree is long.
Your writing is fluid and vivid. And grotesque as his fate seems to be... in the end, there's still hope.
no reason he's gotta be done for. It's just the next adventure!