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RE: Finish the Fiction Story Contest - Week #26 - @bananafish

in #finishthestory6 years ago

I had two impressions from the last line--forgive me if they defy your intent. First I thought: ah, objective reality (the paper under the door) proves the existence of the yellow king. Then I thought: this madman, Mendo, came across yellow promotional flyers and constructed a grotesque fantasy from his diseased obsessions. I think I like the second idea better, but either one works for me. Well told.

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The occult powers of a convincing marketing strategy!

:)) really funny

Ha ha. That's a funny ending!

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