You are a wordsmith...some of the phrases ring out. Just one of many finely crafted sentences:

The creamy liquid sloshed opalescent, the shifting silver twisted and span with shapes and faces

Music!

I wonder, fourth paragraph from the bottom, last word, did you mean content or contest? Maybe I'm interpreting the sense of the paragraph incorrectly.

I will be upvoting this and several others tomorrow--Have to let VP replenish:)