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RE: Tristan and Yseut Screenplay Episode: The Return to Tintagel
I'm up to #4. Posting on the blockchain is tantamount to a copyright! And yes, a following always helps. If I may, your logline didn't grab me. Too long maybe? Have you read 'Save the Cat' by Blake Snyder?
Nice! Thanks for reading! I agree with you that my logline is a bit long and doesn't exactly communicate a goal, excepting for outwitting the king. If you have any suggestions to make it better, I'd be glad to hear them! I have not read Save the Cat, but I'm familiar with the premise. My main screenwriting study was The Screenwriter's Bible.