Mouse -my Entry to the Fifty-word challenge by @Jayna
Writing notes:
This Story is dedicated to the best Mouse ever Warislav. We found him abandoned in a parking lot, he was so small he could flee a conventional mouse cage so I had to get him a snake house ... never told him.
This story is not our story, but it holds the soul of mice everywhere who just want what we all want life, shelter, food and a good friend
(Image credit Dave Renike and a portrait of the fair jubilee made by myself turned into this here universal truth meme)
Nicely written, I was actually going to go down a similar path myself, but changed my mind in the end, and went for something different.. I love how you side with the poor little mouse - they get a lot of bad press, the poor little fellows!
:)
Very nice. Mice can be annoying when they are scritching away in the attic, but they really are cute. You have captured several distinctly different views of mice in your story. Well done.
:)
Almost domestic animal :)
reminds me of the green mile. fun
:)