I was hatched
I was hatched at first
through being birthed out open
and seeing the whole World.
I was then hatched by
through the loving care and
gaze of my loving mother.
I was hatched by then
through the mirror I saw
and I then saw unity.
And hatched I shall be.
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Good stuff @theironfelix working in hatch multiple times..
Yeah, that was a neat challenge to stuff in as many as possible while making sense. Anyways liked your fifty word stories of outer space.
Thanks man, fiftywords is great, one of my favorite little retreats here on Steemit..
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STOPSo much truth in this! I had never thought of it that way, but we do essentially break through all of life's phases, like hatching and being born. Great concept!
Thank you so much. Just got the oppurtunity to express this insight thanks to you making this contest’s prompt being “hatch.” Otherwise I am glad that you liked this post.
I only wonder what will be next week’s prompt now...
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STOPPoetry is a good framework for the progression you're depicting.
An interesting progression...
Thanks!
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Hey the prompt was just real convenient.