My fiftywords story - Island

theblackcrow (44)in #fiftywords • 6 years ago

Thrusting through the tumultuous tides. Crawling over itself in frantic fire, climbing, ever climbing. Knowing only to grow and fight the element that tried to restrain it’s freedom. Raising clouds of steam that bubbled and burst through into the air like triumphant screams. Soon, where nothing was before, the island.

https://pixabay.com/en/new-zealand-white-island-island-3018634/

#writing #story #original #alliteration

6 years ago in #fiftywords by theblackcrow (44)

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niallon11 (68) 6 years ago

Great job man. You will fit in here perfectly and that's one of the better fiftywords that i've read.

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theblackcrow (44) 6 years ago

Thanks niallon11. You're very good to say so. :)

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sukhasanasister (63) 6 years ago

Piping hot sound scape. Joy to read.

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theblackcrow (44) 6 years ago

Thank you very much, you're very kind! :)

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jayna (69) 6 years ago

I love the drama of this short story. Very well done! I also like your alliteration. And an island was born.

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theblackcrow (44) 6 years ago

Thanks jayna. I'm glad you liked it and thanks for commenting. :)

upen-srv (29) 6 years ago

A very good one! Cheers!

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theblackcrow (44) 6 years ago

Thanks upen-srv. :)

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ablaze (61) 6 years ago

Very well crafted @theblackcrow Nice use of personification and alliteration running through it..

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theblackcrow (44) 6 years ago

Thanks ablaze. I adore alliteration always! ;)

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