Jeffy's Boots-Fifty Word Story
“Fits perfect, mom.” Emma’s wide brown eyes turned from Jeffy’s boots to stare at me. “Will Jeffy mind if I use them?”
“Course not.” I smiled so I wouldn't start crying. “He’ll be out there splashing with you.”
“Thanks, Jeffy.” Emma rushed out the door and into the nearest puddle.
HOOOO boy, is this good. @tanglebranch, absolutely stunning, brilliant prose.
Thank you Rhonda, that means a lot coming from you!
I am a tough critic. No argument there. But this. . .quality like this silences the critic and just leaves me in awe.
Oh my. You just made me cry. I want to hug Emma. And her mom. Sounds like they are trying to find their way in a world without Jeffy. Very well done, @tanglebranch!
Thank you Jayna :) I kinda made myself cry a little when I came up with the idea too.
A pretty emotional story.
(And it somewhat reminds me of the movie "It".)
Nicely written though!
Thank you!
Oh that was very heart breaking.
Thank you for reading :)
This is so touching! Very well done!
Thanks! Glad you liked it :)
So poignant, and so effortlessly so.
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Well gosh, thanks so much
Oh my gosh Tangle! This is such a painful yet crazy beautiful story. Like, wow. It's especially great because you get a sense of the whole arc through this snapshot, which is, like, BRO. Ya know?
Thanks so much, Caleb! I miss our Write Club convos 😭 glad you could stop in here. It wouldnt have turned out this great without help from the editors at TWB
You're welcome! I miss them too D,:
The editors at TWB are d o p e! (Winks at growing crowd)
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