"ENDLESS" #50wordsstory.

in #fiftywords6 years ago

She has been waiting for him since he left, 40 years ago, sitting on the same bay, with the same clothes.

-"That's how he saw me the last time".

The snow of time changed her hair, but not her love...

-"The sea will bring you back."
-"I guess... not today."


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Special thanks to @jayna for keeping the #50wordsstory challenge alive!
https://steemit.com/challenge/@jayna/50-word-story-challenge-week-in-review-and-new-prompt

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Oh, my. So much emotion and story packed into this. And so many questions. Love the sentiment she carries as she waits. But will he ever return? Nicely done!

I hope he returns, she deserves it...

Thank you.

In the docks of Saint Blas.

Rain, butterflies and WONONOO

"The snow of time changed her hair, but not her love" very clever... Really nicely written piece of micro fiction..

Thank you so much, I'm trying! :)

This is so lovely and heartbreaking, @luiskrupas. I can only hope that her love returns to her soon. She has been waiting long enough!

She deserves it <3

Love the bittersweet feeling of this excellent story. Well done @luiskrupaz

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