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RE: The Cursed Jewel [50 Word Story]
Oh man, this is just great! I love how the 'curse' works on two levels; the literal time lost, and the more human flaw of George's search, thinking it could ever have mattered. You sure know how to pack these things to bursting point.
Thank you! I am fairly pleased with how it turned out after a few revisions :)