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RE: So Long

in #fiftywords3 years ago

This is lovely, sad and sweet, @alheath. Goodbyes are hard, even when they are necessary and important. I don't know whether Lily and Florence are sisters, room mates, lovers, or friends, but you've done such a nice job of writing this in a way that shows it is a difficult parting for them both.

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Thank you! They're daughter and... a kind of mother. Lily lives in a children's home, which is run by Florence.