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RE: 50-word challenge | 50 शब्दों की लघुकथा
Very clever story, @akdx. I liked the surprise ending!
(One small thing: Be sure to change "beg" (which means to ask for something, like a homeless person begging for food) to "bag" which is something you carry.)
Thank you @jayna. It was a spelling mistake. I have corrected it.