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RE: Fiftywords: Dead Lands Never Bloom (Flash Fiction)
It is never easy to write about war and death. You did a very nice job of writing about this difficult subject, and juxtaposing it against the beauty of spring.
looks up juxtaposing in google translate Wow!!
Thanks for reading, the war part in this story wasn't hard as I only wanted to make the reader feel "a battle just have ended." Still not sure if the "burning flesh" was a brilliant or stupid choice.
For the flower I used "she" instead of "it" because it will give her more life. (In Arabic there's no "it" but only male or female tags, we'll different use the female pronoun here. )
I’m glad I helped you learn anew word in English! 😊
I can only imagine what it must be like to do creative writing in a second language. I’m impressed!