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RE: Tea Party [A 50-Word Story]

in #fiftywords2 years ago

Damn! That's some twist. Great story. Usually people who report contact with the afterlife do not interact with dead relatives on a regular basis. That adds a certain level of creepiness to an already scary possibility

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Thank you, but there's no contact with the afterlife in my story. Just a simple daddy/daughter story :)

Hahaha. I guess I misread it, then. I took the "she gave the ghost a smile" as addressed to Brian/Daddy.
I guess he was a ghosyl father in terms of his absence/presence in the little girl's life/games.