50 words Story Contest Week #14 - The Forgotten founder of Light

in #fiftywords • 7 years ago (edited)

At dawn I brighten the world with my face and hide my face at night with no traces, it's unfortunate they say Edison found light maybe because I am not human but I have been giving light daily which is stored to power up things.
I am just the SUN.sun-pictures-1.jpg

#light #sun #solar #powerup
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     7 years ago (edited)

    Hi, I'm the guest judge for the 50-word contest this week. That's an awesome hook at the end, such a witty twist. Quick notes though, check for spelling errors. Also, please re-read the rules to make sure that you are abiding by them. I would hate for your entry to be ranked below because of it. Reply to this message after you have done so, so that I could grade this accordingly. Thanks!

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       7 years ago 

      I have editted it.
      Thanks Boss.

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         7 years ago 

        Hmm.. Please re-read the rules again. Make sure you're not missing anything essential.

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           7 years ago 

          Done. Thanks for your encouragement.

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             7 years ago 

            Sure thing! Best of luck!

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