50 word Story Contest Week #24- Fierce Blow

in #fiftywords • 7 years ago

Fiercely the blow

Shocking the lost fortune

Shattered the heart

Like a broken wine bottle

Little I thought

His vanishing so near

Only those in my shoe

Can feel the pain of stranded foot

The sorrow of parting 

The sorrow of parting

Without an Aloha….

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#human #poetry #sorrow #love
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