Unconscious- "A fifty words challenge"

in #fiftywords6 years ago (edited)

Unconscious- "A fifty words challenge"


lava

Unconscious!

The world broke apart around her!
As she herself came crashing back to consciousness, so did flying balls of hot molten lava come crashing to the earth.
Breaking the ground and burning houses, melting its way towards her and turning to stone in the river bed.

Was she in Alaska?
by @anonymummy

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so she's been concussed some how and woken up far from any roads. she doesn't know where she is. Or how she got there. It's freezing. And dark. balls of lava are raining down everywhere. there's a stream before her and what appears to be burning houses. the landscape looks notorious. But doesn't make sense.
Is it possible she isn't actually awake or hallucinating or mad or in a coma? I dunno. I haven't decided.

A great first attempt and welcome to #fiftywords... I dont quite understand the ending about Alaska though?

neither does she

Like @ablaze, I would love to hear the explanation of Alaska too.

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