Broken- "A fifty words challenge"
Broken- "A fifty words challenge"
Broken
Heart breaking,
Earth quaking.
Floating, spinning.
Swaying tipping.
Never steady,
He wasn’t ready!
Not for this…
It can’t be true?
by @anonymummy
Thankyou @jayna for this awesome #fiftywords challenge prompt (broken)
You can find a link to @jaynas fifty words latest weekly challenge here
Thanks for reading!
I would love to know the setting and context for this one. But although I'm not really sure what's happening in this story, it was an enjoyable read!
ok so a man comes home to find a loved one dead.
And he starts to fall apart.
I just made it up randomly nice and vague so the specifics of the dead person could be left to the imagination of the reader.
murder? suicide? man woman child lover sibling parent offspring.
I like that about poems. that they can be vague and widely relatable and diverse.
People love do debate the story behind such things in English classes.