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RE: searchlight :: 50 word short story
Still wondering where the twist is going to be. Where is the light really coming from? It seems too good to be true that she could make it out safely again.
Or maybe I'm just pessimistic. There can be happy endings too. Great story!
I'm no good at happy endings, so I'm glad jayna took care of the hard part for me with her third segment :)