The Breach
Alarms were blaring everywhere.
”Boss! We have a breach in section 5!”
”A breach? How is that possible? Our outer walls are strong!
”We don’t know yet, boss. But workers that were around got killed by an unknown fluid that came through the opening.”
”We must do something. Send security personnel up there, maybe they can catch an intruder.”
”Sir, the neutros are already there. Should we still send the teams T and B?”
”Absolutely. Send everyone we got.”
The worker ran, to deliver the instructions as fast as possible. He was drenched in sweat when he finally reached the teams T and B.
”Big boss is sending you to section 5, we have a breach. Unknown liquids pouring in, possibly some intruders. You need to go right now.”
”We’ll be taking the macros with us, just in case”, the T team’s leader said. The worker nodded.
”Alright everyone, let’s go up there and fuck shit up!"
When the T and B teams reached section five, they were met by a chaos of neutros and macros, other employees of the company. They were already rushing around and eliminating any trace of the cause for the breach.
The T team’s and B team’s leader exchanged a short look, before wordlessly agreeing on how to continue.
”Set it all on fire” The B leader said.
”Burn it to the ground.” The T leader added.
The teams began to run wild.
Hank started scratching his arm. ”Fucking mosquitos", he said. His body seemed to always have a severe overreaction to the bites.
Informational Source:
Normal and Severe Immune Responses to Mosquito Bites
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Good post thanks for sharing
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This must be one of her's worst stories, I thought until I hit the end. "Mosquitos," I chuckled. @suesa knows how to surprise us. It's brilliant.
High quality, even in shitposts :P
Mosquitos, you kill one and realize that there are billions more of those
Don't know what's going on.
10/10
Experiment in different storytelling
Yep, I see! Really liked that the reader is somehow on it's own to conclude things out of the information you give. And for me it's a good example of what one sentence can bring to the story. Without the last words, this story would have been boring, nothing special.
Keep up, see you!
I like this style, perhaps because to me it has a "comic book" feel to it or rather like a script.
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A creeping approach! Yaswami scientists. He had experience of studying in graduate school)
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Tiny warriors in the body vs deadly mosquitos :)