You are viewing a single comment's thread from:RE: Challenge #02437-F247: Looking For the LightView the full contextryivhnn (65)in #fiction • 7 years ago Poor Human Jenkins :<
Ok, this one genuinely made me tear up. Reminds me of the shell-shock, or PTSD, soldiers suffer.
I was aiming for that PTSD feel and I'm so glad I nailed it. Onwards to the next attempt to make you feel things.
I shared this one with several friends of mine on facebook. You got more than just me in tears over this one.