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RE: Show us your talent contest | Pregnant written by @afolwalex
This is a story out of the ordinary, I like it a lot, somehow made me laugh and feel bad for the girl, that's why you can not mix feelings with alcohol, always ends up in something bad. It would be good if you used this "—" for the dialogues. Thank you very much for your entry to the contest.
Italicized, right?
Thanks for reading.
I don't think he meant putting words in talics but rather in quote. For example "I am running out of time"
Nice story line by the way
Thanks.