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RE: How Life Defines You - Part 9 - An Unexpected Guest - From The Keltorin Series
Thanks @krystle, certainly does read well. Certainly written by an Aussie. I am following some of the steemlords posts.
Thanks glad you liked it, yeah there were a few moments when I actually felt the aussie come through on the reread - Dialogue is not my strongest area, so I am trying to stick with language I use and see used often lol.
The 'mum' line made me think maybe 'ma' would be less awkward for Americans to read, then there's the ' for fucks sake' line lol - not sure but I think I do better when I use this language, but I'm not sure it still needs work in general.
I haven't had a chance to check out the steemlords posts but I will certainly try, I have been hearing about it just swamped at the moment.
Thanks for checking this out - Cheers :)
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