Thank you!
I'm at the stage where I feel like I'm doing too much dialogue... dialogue is my weak spot, but my partner thinks I'm improving in that regard... I have plans for the two characters, but at the same time I don't want to harp on about it; my story isn't quite a romance, though as I imagine their future chapters it's necessary for Darien's selfish plan and The End Chapters.
Engaging revelations in your characters’ development.
Thank you!
I'm at the stage where I feel like I'm doing too much dialogue... dialogue is my weak spot, but my partner thinks I'm improving in that regard... I have plans for the two characters, but at the same time I don't want to harp on about it; my story isn't quite a romance, though as I imagine their future chapters it's necessary for Darien's selfish plan and The End Chapters.