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RE: Finding Redemption (Part 2) : Day 271 - 365 Days of Writing

in #fiction • 7 years ago

You have a minor grammatical mistake in the following sentence:

My father was said to have hated them for turning there own children against them.
It should be their own instead of there own.

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