B+B | 50 Word Story
Brad and Bonnie, hand in hand, dashed through the dim forest at dawn. They didn’t dare waste any time–Brad was due for deployment.
The tree. Brad dug the knife's blade into the bark. They held each other and admired his handiwork.
A bittersweet kiss–engraved in their memories forever.
This is my entry to @jayna's 50 word story prompt contest. I enjoyed crafting my first 50 word story and I hope you dug it.
It’s lovely! Beautiful and poignant. I hope Brad comes back home to Bonnie soon.
Thank you for the kind words on this little piece @jayna
And thank you for hosting this contest :)
Nice work here. I like the alliteration in the first paragraph :)
Thank you @negativer
Wanted to experiment a bit and (very) short pieces seem to be ideal for that :)
Aww! I love how you took a small snapshot of a much larger story, but managed to give us conflict and context all the while! Good stuff :D
Thank you @caleblailmusik
I'm glad that the tiny arc came through, I didn't want it just to be a snippet of a story :)
Sweet story, I enjoyed reading
Thank you, glad you enjoyed it @onewithearth
Nice concept, well done. Ah, the sad fortunes of war! :O
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Thank you kindly @creatr
This is profoundly beautiful :)
Thank you so much :) @tezmel
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Sweet story, I enjoyed reading