Thank you Everitt Mickey, I like the beginning of this story, I read part 17 first of course, don't know why, but sometimes I just seem to start at the end or the middle of a book series. Now I will read it in order. I find I am liking steemit for stories more and more. You used some nice imagery in your story, the gifs were well chosen, adding to, not distracting from, the story.
I will be adding you to my little steemmag, so I do not lose you in my steemblog/post mess.

Thank you again for a well written, and mind capturing story. I am still trying to figure if Old Man is the centaur, or if he someone else, and whether he is a robot, guess I will learn as I read. Thanks again.