The Deceit - Poem
There they are, the deceitful pair
They flaunt around without a care
They have hurt me with what they have done
I will get my revenge, i'll spoil their fun
I'm hiding in the carousel, i'm peering over the cart
I'm wondering if i should use a spell and break their deceitful hearts
I saw him first, she knows that, my deceitful sister didn't care
She went for the kill, and drew him in...oh yes she did so dare
Well their happy time will come to end, i'll make sure of that
I'll raise my staff and cast my spell, i'll hurt that spiteful brat
In no time her beauty will fade, and her lover will come to me
That's where he belongs... just you wait and see
Nancy- Penny Drops
Please note:The Penny Drops is a supernatural mystery - A pentalogy not yet released. These characters are in the books, and these stories are designed to give you some background into the characters without giving the plots away.
I like it - sets a dark and sinister mood.
On the 4th line first stanza, is there a word missing?
I was just testing to see if you was reading it haha.....Yes and thankyou!
Oh good, then I passed the test :)
You did thank you for the comments really appreciate it, it's nice to know people read my work. :-)
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