It's a troubled tale that didn't end so well for the protagonist. Especially the comment about hoping he didn't ruin anything for another family. Your story made its point effectively.
I got it now. I'm sorry about that. The idea started at the end with the image of the doorway. I wrote the story around it. Everything fell into place nicely and I'm quite satisfied with it. Did you see that ending coming at all?
The "dead" part I got, even without you saying it. It was the "I hope I didn't ruin another family" that really caught me off-guard - with a gut punch!
Hey! ... I'm a bit confused by this comment... or I'm tired. Either way... huh?
It's a troubled tale that didn't end so well for the protagonist. Especially the comment about hoping he didn't ruin anything for another family. Your story made its point effectively.
I got it now. I'm sorry about that. The idea started at the end with the image of the doorway. I wrote the story around it. Everything fell into place nicely and I'm quite satisfied with it. Did you see that ending coming at all?
The "dead" part I got, even without you saying it. It was the "I hope I didn't ruin another family" that really caught me off-guard - with a gut punch!