Steemit Challenge Season 26 Week-6: Two-timing
Dear @, below is the detailed assessment of your submission.
| Criteria | Marks | Remarks |
|---|---|---|
| Story start to finish | 4.5/5 | |
| Originality & Uniqueness | 2.7/3 | |
| Presentation | 0.9/1 | |
| My observation | 0.9/1 | |
| Total | 9/10 |
Feedback
Your story started well barring a couple of oversights like the protagonist according to the prompt is in mid 20s but you showed her as a teenager.
A story in fiction category needs no conclusion but you did that by giving your opinion why you saved him from getting tempted. it was supposed to be done by the characters themselves.
Thank you very much for reviewing my post.