Steemit Challenge Season 26 Week-6: Two-timing
Dear @, below is the detailed assessment of your submission.
| Criteria | Marks | Remarks |
|---|---|---|
| Story start to finish | 4.7/5 | Good |
| Originality & Uniqueness | 3/3 | Good |
| Presentation | 1/1 | Good |
| My observation | 0.9/1 | Who was Fanny Torrenson? |
| Total | 9.6/10 |
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I enjoyed reading this story of two co-passengers one of whom was tempted towards the beautiful girl but the other was a valuer or appraiser working on "Seduction Techniques" Good job
She changed John's name in her book but you changed the main character's name in your story. This was Tina and not Fanny.
Jajaja. Sí, tuve un "lapsus mentis", jeje. Gracias por la validación.