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RE: La amistad improbable

in #fiction-s26wk410 months ago
Steemit Challenge Season 26 Week-4: The Unlikely Friendship

Dear @ , here is the detailed assessment of your submission:

CriteriaMarksRemarks
Story start to finish4.8/5
Originality & Uniqueness2.9/3
Presentation1/1
My observation0.9/1
Total9.6/10

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  • As a marketing head of a large corporate company I have a little doubt that anyone would give me a second chance with such a large amount going down the drain.

  • You gave your story a nice twist by presenting Tina as daughter of the major shareholder, that saved the situation.

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El argumento de que el dinero de los gastos se recuperaba con la firma de los contratos, de alguna manera benefició al Dev. Quizás, ahora con el control financiero que le pusieron; el departamento de marketing, en lugar de mejorar, empeore. Hay gente que dice que: "El descontrol surge de controles exgerados", jeje.

Gracias por la valoración.

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