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RE: Wordsmiths Fiction Week 5: Season 24: The Mysterious Passenger / El viajero sospechoso
Hello @enrisanti, thank you so much for taking part in Week-5 of the Steemit Challenge - Season 24! We truly appreciate the time and creativity you put into your entry. Your assessment, including feedback and scores based on our evaluation criteria, is provided below.
| Criteria | Marks |
|---|---|
| Story Setting & Word-Building: That was a nice imagination and use of fiction even if it sounded against the rules. | 2.8/3 |
| Theme & Message: Them sounded okay as if the passenger entered your country to sell horse power | 1.9/2 |
| Formatting & Presentation: It was okay but for the use of one extra image than allowed. | 1.6/2 |
| Originality & Uniqueness: | 2.8/3 |
| Total | 9.1/10 |
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True to your username "laughing" you made me laugh the way you finished your story. Every one was ready to let the mysterious passenger enter at a price.
Muchas gracias por evaluar mi historia, mi estimado amigo. Saludos cordiales.