Hi dear,
I can understand that it's for a simple minded person hard to follow the story. I like to add to that those for sure will not read it because it's simple too long and most likely they don't like reading.
What surprises me is that you wrote among the 4 rules (see 3 and 4) that is was an easy written story. Perhaps it's good to change that since it's the opposite of what is said in the first two.

I wish you a happy day and thanks for taking the time to reply.
Super!