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RE: Semana 1 de ficción de Wordsmiths: El líder desaparecido
Who is @near @senehasa? Too lazy to change the name into @gertu or is this report meant for someone else?
Interesting report
Did you notice point 1 + 2 are the opposite of 3 + 4? It makes no sense at all. I am curious what you read.
I had to translate and understand the story perfectly.
I love to read one of your great stories. Can you give me a link? Thank you
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@wakeupkitty the tale & story lover and writer.
Dear @wakeupkitty,
First of all, I apologize for misspelling her name.
Next, thank you very much for your reply to my feedback.
My feedback is based on how the story felt to a first-time reader. The magical world she creates is very attractive, but to understand some parts, the reader needs to think deeper. Sometimes she pretends that the leader followed the red-haired girl willingly. Other times it seemed he was trapped and suffering, unable to escape. When considering the theme, it is a little unclear to me whether the key message is about love, being trapped, or something else.
Except for that part, I truly appreciate the way she organized the story and the creative twist she added. I respect her writing, and my feedback is only to support her writing improvement. Once again I am thankful to you for your thoughts.
cc @gertu.
I think there is a mistake here with reading my comments, @senehasa.
Thank you very much for the contest and I'll see you in the next contests.
Thank you very much.
Hi dear,
I can understand that it's for a simple minded person hard to follow the story. I like to add to that those for sure will not read it because it's simple too long and most likely they don't like reading.
What surprises me is that you wrote among the 4 rules (see 3 and 4) that is was an easy written story. Perhaps it's good to change that since it's the opposite of what is said in the first two.
I wish you a happy day and thanks for taking the time to reply.
Super!
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This is a contest call for @wakeupkitty, from me.
I invited you, in my post is the link for you to enter and read.
Senehasa, is one of the moderators of the contest. He tells me that there are parts he couldn't understand, anyway, I wrote it in Spanish and I think the translation was difficult for him.
You are called @near!
Did you notice that?
And the 4 reasons given do not make sense.
The name “near” is a translation error. I don't know what happened there.
I was looking at your point of view in relation to the report they passed. Whoever moderates the contests has the right to say what is good and what is not. They are supposed to be better writers than those of us who are writing these stories.
I think it all comes down to the better or worse way of translating. I must improve the way I make my sentences so that when translated they can make sense.
Thank you for your support, your critique as a writer is flattering to me, thank you so much for your support. @wakeupkitty.