The name “near” is a translation error. I don't know what happened there.
I was looking at your point of view in relation to the report they passed. Whoever moderates the contests has the right to say what is good and what is not. They are supposed to be better writers than those of us who are writing these stories.
I think it all comes down to the better or worse way of translating. I must improve the way I make my sentences so that when translated they can make sense.
Thank you for your support, your critique as a writer is flattering to me, thank you so much for your support. @wakeupkitty.