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RE: Katie's Run (Part 1 - A Farmpunk Contest Entry)
I'm sorry I'm too late to upvote this post. A really intriguing story that I hope you do actually finish.
The old man worked on the crop-duster parked below, it’s metal skin peeled back to reveal the intestinal tangle of wiring.
What a great sentence. So vivid and revealing. You really captured the insides of a vehicle, and gave me a great vision of that. Thanks, @calluna.