Excellent metaphor that you do with the violin (instrument) and music with respect to human relationships ...
Your writing is very enjoyable and pleasant to read. You write without rhetoric, you write with passion and you invite the reader to follow you.
It was nice reading you @dmoonfire
I hope the relationship between Linsan and Palisis will grow with the story, they are both important as are the little things that I hopefully scattered in the chapter with hints. :)
Thank you!
More than a narrator you are a poet!