Es una hermosa historia. Entiendo que ocurrirá un evento. Un ser adulto despierta. Con un desprendimiento. Es un buen tema.
It is a beautiful story. I understand that an event will occur. An adult being awakens. With a detachment. It's a good theme.
Thank you so very much! This is definitely the "quiet before the storm" since the next chapter is when things take a sharp, downward turn. I really appreciate the feedback.
I wish it was very successful, with the development of the plot. @dmoonfire.