Intriguing. You have a nice writing style. :-)

Since Steemit allows for 5 tags, you might want to consider adding a couple more to your post. Here is a good list to get you started: https://steemit.com/tags

Maybe add "writing"? You can edit any post until it's 7 days old by clicking on the "Edit" button at the bottom.

Best of luck on your book!