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RE: NOW WE CAN HELP TO SAVE A FAMILY FROM CPS!
@taliakerch, Fantastic research! It seems they have made so much effort and are so close to success. @markwhittam does this satisfy your reservations?
Talia, here are two simple ways to improve the article.
- Copy the Russian text from each photograph here and paste it below the photograph. Then we can translate it for ourselves with Google and learn the details of the situation. Details make the difference in a presentation or sale, and this is the only one non-Russian readers could want from your thorough job. (It makes me want to give you a job doing this for me!)
- Make the bank and PayPal info extra clear. Maybe also put it at the bottom of the postp Then people can easily find it and copy and paste the address or numbers without error when making a donation.
Cheers,
Andrew
Andrew, thank you so much!
You advice really is wise!
I thought to put text in Russian, but then decided just to retell the sense, was afraid the post would be too long, and people wouldn't want to spend time for translations.
But ok, if you say so, I'll do it!
You're welcome, Talia.
Your summaries are good. They keep the context clear and make the post read fast. It gave me the feeling I was running with you to save them. It's an amazing effect, really. You are an good writer.
The Russian text looks different so it can easily be skipped and read later. Cheers.