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RE: ESTEEM8 - Presentation video
I am a big fan of your pursuit to create an alternative to steemit.com but I am going to be brutally honest about my impression of this video so that it may help with your crowdfunding.
You didn't grab me within the first 5-10 seconds. A simple question would do the trick. Something like: "What if we could re-invent social media?" Your goal is to get people curious about your offer as early as possible in the video.
It took almost a minute for you to get to your unique selling proposition. That's way way way too long.
Work on your copy, take a Udemy course if you need to, because it sucks. (the video and the music is pretty good though").
Thanks for feedback, we'll shorten the video, and make the beginin more attractive.
Looking forward to it. Again, I'm cheering you on even if my comment seems a bit harsh. It's only because I care. :-)
We prefer constructive feedback, that make things moving forward.
I found the music a bit boring. Just too much of the same thing...and I agree the video should be shortened.
Point 1 & 2: Fully Agree.
Point 3: kind of harsh statement, but this references to point 1 and 2.
yes, I agree.