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"Confusion"
His eyes saw nothing but darkness
Nothing, his ears hear not a single sound
He almost succumbs to madness
The world lost its greatness
When there's nothing around
And his eyes saw nothing but darkness
His body felt the stiffness
Yet he must stand his ground
Or he will succumb to madness
While standing he's attack by dizziness
Making him lose his bound
Yet there's still nothing but darkness
Giving up is easy, yet he still tried his hardest
Despite that he nearly lost the round
Thus he almost succumb to madness
There must be a way out of this bleakness
He refuses to run around like a hound
A determination that truly astounds
Thus resisting the call of madness
What is a Villanelle?
A villanelle (also known as villanesque) is a nineteen-line poetic form consisting of five tercets followed by a quatrain. There are two refrains and two repeating rhymes, with the first and third line of the first tercet repeated alternately until the last stanza, which includes both repeated lines. The villanelle is an example of a fixed verse form. The word derives from Latin, then Italian, and is related to the initial subject of the form being the pastoral.
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