You have a minor misspelling in the following sentence:
However, one important thing many seem not to choose to shou out of thier mind is the horrors those who misss the Rapture will experience.It should be their instead of thier.
You have a minor misspelling in the following sentence:
However, one important thing many seem not to choose to shou out of thier mind is the horrors those who misss the Rapture will experience.It should be their instead of thier.