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RE: EmojiPoetry WEEK 15: ๐Ÿ’Ž

in #emojipoetry โ€ข 7 years ago (edited)

Hi @elementm here is my entry. :)

https://steemit.com/emojipoetry/@jovema/freedom

Tears fall from the bird's eyes,
Like raindrops from sapphire sky.
Trying to get out from this prison,
Heart is breaking, full of poison.

One day, the bird managed to free and
explores the world,
Flaps her tiny wings, painted in gold.
Bird is now flying up so high,
Like a glittering diamond in the sky.

๐Ÿ’งโฌ‡๏ธ๐Ÿฆ…๐Ÿ‘
๐Ÿ’ฆ๐ŸŒง
๐Ÿƒ๐Ÿผ๐Ÿš๐Ÿšฆ
๐Ÿ’”๐Ÿ–คโš ๏ธ
โ›…๏ธ๐ŸŒคโ˜€๏ธ๐ŸŒฅ๐Ÿฆ…๐Ÿ†“๐ŸŒ
๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿฃ๐Ÿ–Œ๐Ÿฅ
๐Ÿฆ…โฌ†๏ธ๐Ÿž
โœจ๐Ÿ’Žโ˜๏ธ

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Congratulations, you're this week's first entry ๐Ÿ‘! I like that you've written about both sadness and triumph in this piece.

thank you. But i need to practice more. โ˜บ๏ธ

Great entry, amazing imagery! ๐Ÿ‘

ย 7 years agoย (edited)

Thank you. :)

Thank you. โ˜บ๏ธ

Thank you again @krizia

You're welcome!

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