You are viewing a single comment's thread from:

RE: The Earth Job - Electric Dreams Contest #12

in #electricdreams6 years ago

@ gaby-crb, what an interesting story. You have made 2 main sections in this story, i.e Talia, Roman and Chase. Then you linked all of them into one. I love how you wrote it in a way of mandate transformed into some animal or insects form. The story line was new to me. My pity little Talia, first saw the cow, then dog? 😊 But seems that she was shocked when she first met Chase in a cow form but after that she out looking for them. How you came out such a story? Now, I am wondering, if you continue the story, will Talia taken by Chase and Roman, how her life would be in another world. And how her mum life would be. If they left Talia alone, would Talia tell her mother on her adventure and would her mother believe her? Hmm.. all these were an uncertainty unless you continue the story. Which I hope…..

Coin Marketplace

STEEM 0.17
TRX 0.14
JST 0.028
BTC 58316.34
ETH 2583.46
USDT 1.00
SBD 2.43